no more me...what is left is just a ruin...
no more me, just a flesh...
no more me, not anymore,I vanished inch by inch
each time, with the tears I poured
I am nowhere and everywhere...
just wandering in between,like a soul
trying to get beyond borders...
Copyright 2008 Svetlana M. Sokolova
2 comments:
awesome.. write some lines in this
Sveta,
Your poems are quite lovely - your words and phrases deftly dance and writhe. creating a series of little pictures and sensual moments. Rather than relying upon declarative commentaries or pained accusations, you suggest, allude to and touch upon your subject, leaving it to your reader to "fill in the blanks." You allow us to both feel your pain and sadness as well as to experience what those emotions mean to you, without anchoring them in specificity and detail. You share not your details but your life.
Thank you, Bob
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